Silver

Doritos Commercial

Batavia

Commercial

Entry Description

Deep in the sunset woods lies terror, fear, and DANGER! A young man runs for his life "Someone help me, PLEASE HELP ME!" while being pursued by a terrifying, unidentified man with a baseball bat! *GASP* The young man falls! THIS IS IT! The terrifying man raises his bat to destroy the bag of Doritos that lies next to him! WHAT TRAGEDY! The Doritos are destroyed and the young man is in distress! Their is no doubt these chips are DANGEROUSLY DELICIOUS!

Judge 1

Positives: The audio and video quality was excellent considering you were shooting an outdoor action sequence.

Improvements: The doritos package comes out of nowhere. Even if it's hardly noticeable, the guy being chased should be carrying it with him. Loss of continuity otherwise.

Judge 2

Positives: Good variety of shots. It looks like it could be a real Doritos commercial.

Improvements: The lighting contrast was pretty noticable. Washed out in some places and too dark in others. Audio could be cleaner.

Judge 3

Positives: Very entertaining. Great concept.

Improvements: Shot transition was a little bit slow. I think you needed more shots of the potential victim to build dramatic effect.