This is a commercial promoting the website reuseit.com and the virtues of resuable water bottles.
Positives: Very creative... the type of spot I would relate to a web site ad. Good editing.
Improvements: Everything is cut straight to beats... a slow dissolve to the reuse it graphic doesn't work. Stick with the hard cuts... maybe being it in word-by-word cut to the beat of the audio.
Positives: I really liked the idea of using the sounds of the bottle edited together to make music.
Improvements: I think you could have found even more sounds to add to the final commercial.
Positives: Super creative. Amazing use of natural sound effect.
Improvements: Take a little bit more time with your lighting.