Silver

Radon

Homewood-Flossmoor

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Detecting radon in your house is important.

Judge 1

Positives: good acting at beginning good to see how to set up the detector good call to action!!!

Improvements: 'popping' on announcer's voice (mic quality-wind screen?) too much use of titles - titles too long at times

Judge 2

Positives: good effects Great text

Improvements: narrator was not clear use text as clear steps

Judge 3

Positives: liked the use of multi info input liked how the equipment was shown

Improvements: couldnt read half the words written