Silver

Project K

Homewood-Flossmoor

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Action Thriller.

Judge 1

Positives: Well-executed action-thriller. Good pacing. Nice visual effects with gunshots and stunts.

Improvements: The frame of reference was lost a few times and that can be confusing to the viewer. I'm referring to when an actor is facing one direction and the next edit he is facing the other direction. Try to be consistent and logical in your shot planning. Perhaps try storyboarding and look into the 180 degree rule. But overall you had some really nice shots and well-timed edits.

Judge 2

Positives: Great pacing. The edit and music really helped drive the action. great efx.

Improvements: I'd like to know little more about the story and what unique spin it may have on the genre. I feel like I was watching a scene and would have liked to see more of the movie's elements.

Judge 3

Positives: Did a really good job showing the message and tone of your story. Fun action packed concept. The audio was diverse and was clearly heard.

Improvements: The end was a little confusing, not sure who was supposed to stop him.