Silver

Johnson Water Bottle Commercial

Riverside Brookfield

Commercial

Entry Description

Make the wise choice - use reusable!

Judge 1

Positives: Clear narrative with solid message.

Improvements: Too many jump cuts. Also, add some natural sound to the workout video sequence. Too sterile otherwise.

Judge 2

Positives: Good variety of shots, and length of shots/cuts worked well. Good clean audio.

Improvements: There must be more than one transition effect in your editing software. See if there is some way to make the ending smoother because it ends kind of abruptly.

Judge 3

Positives: Very creative. Good clean audio.

Improvements: Needed to be a bit longer. You need to focus a little bit more on how you light your scene.