1st Place :: Division AA

Resto Water Bottle Commercial

Riverside Brookfield

Commercial

Entry Description

A boy and his water bottle share a lot of memories together. Stickers on the bottle show the progression through time as the boy is shown completely grown up.

Judge 1

Positives: Very creative way to show the value of reusable water bottles. Loved the water bottle on the porch shot.

Improvements: I wish you could have extended the age range even more. Maybe three people at three different ages the final person being perhaps 30-years or older. Great concept... could have capitalized even more.

Judge 2

Positives: I like the idea of showing the water bottle through the years. Nice pacing on the editing and editing to the music.

Improvements: Some more shots of the kid drinking from the bottle instead of filling it up would be more effective. Have more variety of locations other than just the home and school.

Judge 3

Positives: Great concept. Very nice shooting.

Improvements: Take a little bit more time with your lighting. Some of the shots were a little bit dark.