A clip of Christopher from the short film, “Rumors”. All shot and edited by Jason Lee Goo.
Positives: Excellent shot sequence. Well thought out and executed.
Improvements: I would have included more from "Rumors" on your contest entry.
Positives: Nice job conveying anxiety. Sound effect of the echoing door slam at the end was good too.
Improvements: Could spend a bit more time building up the anxiety with more variety of shots/extreme closeup of hand gripping sink or wide eye getting wider or something like that.
Positives: Great use of camera angles. Great editing.
Improvements: The lighting was very basic. Lighting is a powerful tool and could have dramatically changed the mood of this piece to make it ever scarier.