Coming to a theater near you- this thriller.
Positives: I thought the voice-over narration and the video fading to black was impactful. Good use of sound & video effects. Main theme was clearly explained.
Improvements: I felt like there could've been a little more development of the characters and that the pace would've picked up more at the end with more quick edits and good sound bites.
Positives: The tone is perfectly established and the implied action shots against the monologue really delivers.
Improvements: I think the font choice is way iconic and draws an unwanted comparison. The music is a little congratulatory, it's revisit with something more driving.
Positives: There was some really nice camera work. Did a great job setting the tone of the film.
Improvements: Lighting was a little too dark at times. There was also a lot of fade to black transitions in the beginning.