1st Place :: Division A

Diary of Jane

Metea Valley

Music Video

Entry Description

A music video of the same title based of the song from the artist, Breaking Benjamin.

Judge 1

Positives: Bravo! Extremely creative use of camera shots and composition that just worked well with the editing and choice of music. Lens flair from the purposely placed lights added to the effect quality achieved. Great job.

Improvements: Probably would have used a dissolve at the end to transition to the last shot. Not much that I could suggest would improve this piece.

Judge 2

Positives: Excellent job! Great camera work! Good lighting. Nice job creatively controlling your colors and exposures. Really nice job with the edit. This is a true MTV type video!!!!!!!

Improvements: I would have liked to see a few more close ups. Would it be possible to put the band in a few different locations?

Judge 3

Positives: Great camera work / framing / shot selections. Mood created by lighting and locations was very compelling. Great work!

Improvements: The narrative was a bit confusing regarding the characters / conflicts. A couple of the shots looked off on audio synch, but only a couple.