Gold

London's Big Adventure

Glenbrook South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

In a college interview, London Dawson's mind drifts off as she reflects about her struggles and accomplishments in life thus far. This film was based off of a true story.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice job on the varied camera angles and framing. Opening scene is fun and creatively unique

Improvements: Not much needs to be improved - nice video. Interview scene the lighting is flat, but it didn't detract too much. Background audio caused some problems too but again the video worked.

Judge 2

Positives: I really liked your camera shots. You mixed your angles and close ups-to-wide shots well. You told the story very well. Nice job.

Improvements: Be a little smoother when going from one song to the next. Make sure the audio levels stay consistent from one scene to the next.

Judge 3

Positives: Very good video. From the storyline to the editing, the video was great. It was fun to watch and hope for a happy ending. Great job.

Improvements: Maybe smooth out the audio levels in some places.