Bronze

Don't Touch the Macs.

Maine East

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A public service announcement that raises awareness and encourages students to keep their computer screens clean.

Judge 1

Positives: The problem was presented well and easy to understand.

Improvements: This is NOT a tragedy and I really did't think use of that word was appropriate... not even in a satirical way. I also think the music was inappropriate.

Judge 2

Positives: N/a

Improvements: I think you could have told the story a little better. And you should have gave more close ups of the screens.

Judge 3

Positives: Some of the visuals were creative.

Improvements: Over dramatic. Dirty computer screens may be a problem but not a tragedy!