Gold

Senior Citizens

Homewood-Flossmoor

Feature Story

Entry Description

Kids bringing a smile to senior citizens

Judge 1

Positives: Good job with voice overs nice pacing

Improvements: focus is soft on a few shots more b-roll variety

Judge 2

Positives: What a positive and uplifting story. Concisely told, and intelligently presented.

Improvements: The background music could have been looped more smoothly. there were moments in the piece where the music skipped back, or paused, and it became distracting to the viewer. Many of the subjects being interviewed were underlit. It's important to adequately light the person in the foreground, so as to separate them from the background.

Judge 3

Positives: Great shot compositions. Overall tone of the piece was pitch-perfect.

Improvements: Perhaps this piece could have benifited from a quicker pace and livelier edit.