2nd Place :: Division A

Converse

Homewood-Flossmoor

Commercial

Entry Description

Leader & Butzbach commercial state entry

Judge 1

Positives: camera perspective. Shoes were the lead character

Improvements: Soundtrack was choppy at the beginning. Not sure you need the Urgent Care sign shot. Kinda interrupted the nice pacing you had going.

Judge 2

Positives: Wow, wonderful job! I loved everything; the camera work, editing, choice of music, choreography...

Improvements: Maybe it could be edited down to be a little shorter, but I really liked the whole spot.

Judge 3

Positives: Good idea, a world of converse. Nicely shot and edited, good music choice. A commercial of only product shots, something a client would love, but used to tell the story of friendship. I like they way that you focus only on feet.

Improvements: Maybe a better ending shot before the end-title.