Bronze

The Empty Glow

Homewood-Flossmoor

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A silent film by Charlie Bialobok

Judge 1

Positives: Good job editing the text and computer graphics; Good message and solid plot development;

Improvements: Would like to have seen more different camera framing since it's a silent film and is dependent on visuals; Music mix and possibly more variety could be an improvement. overall good job.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice concept. The fact that there was no dialogue didn't keep me from following the story line. The music and graphics worked fine. Good mix of camera angles.

Improvements: You might have started the music as soon as the you tube video stopped. The dead air was a little distracting. The transition from one song to another could be a little smoother.

Judge 3

Positives: Creative and interesting. The text graphics of the computer sceen worked well.

Improvements: Create some dramatic lighting.