Gold

The Void

Homewood-Flossmoor

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Finding yourself after a life altering event.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job on the story and character development; Audio and sound mix was well done - dialogue was very clear and can be heard Good message - keep up the good work

Improvements: Possibly some more or different camera angles during the conversation or cutting away to something related to the topic

Judge 2

Positives: Nice job of editing. Changed angles at a good pace. Good storyline. Good job.

Improvements: I can't suggest any major improvements. You might adjust the audio mix in a spot or two where the music was just a little hot and I had to strain to understand the dialogue. Overall a good video.

Judge 3

Positives: Outstanding job. Lighting and camera shots work very well with the storyline. Awesome job.

Improvements: No improvements needed.