A parody of a 1950’s cleaning product commercial.
Positives: 1950's look. visual effects and sounds
Improvements: Audio was echoed. performance
Positives: Fun idea. Nice transition effects, as well.
Improvements: If you're truly going for a 50's parody look, you might consider not shooting in a modern kitchen.
Positives: Cute idea, well cast. I really like the sequence of the messes disappearing using the "magic" sound effect. Nice sound work.
Improvements: Be careful with parodies, if you were presenting this to a real client they may object to their product being presented as an "old" product.