Silver

You're Next...

Maine East

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A mysterious curse befalls students who eat the apple. You may be next.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job on the special effects; Story held the viewer's attention and some nice camera placement;

Improvements: Quicker edits could improve the pace of the overall video; Use of eerie music and sound effects were good, but could of used more;

Judge 2

Positives: Good mix of camera angles and close ups. Nice editing- the pacing helped to build the suspense.

Improvements: The audio mix was a little rough on a couple of transitions. I felt a few scenes were a little long. Shorten them or add some cutaways.

Judge 3

Positives: Very nice job. Camera shots combined with music SFX worked very well together. Nice creative storyline.

Improvements: No improvements needed.