This is a public service announcement made on distracted teen driving. Our goal was to show a very normal teen in normal situations and the outcome of that in the car.
Positives: nice shots good music
Improvements: on a couple of in car shots another arm/hand is seen holding the phone - made it confusing as to what the distraction was. narrator could have been in a SIRI voice and read less like reading a script to enhance the effect that it's her phone. I get the concept that you wanted it to be a surprise but it was still confusing at the reveal. Graphic - turn it off - where'd it come from?
Positives: color of lighting set mood nicely nice shot angles
Improvements: lighting was very dark script should be rewritten
Positives: nice flow of content good visuals to go with content
Improvements: very poor lighting more detail