Bronze

Breathe Me.

Maine East

Music Video

Entry Description

A literal interpretation of the song, "Breathe Me," by Sia.

Judge 1

Positives: Audio is clear. Shots were in focus

Improvements: Shots too repetitive. A male lip syncing to a female voice disconcerting.

Judge 2

Positives: Plot was well thought out, and excellent special effects

Improvements: Camera shots lacked sufficient lighting, and audio could have been more in sync.

Judge 3

Positives: Pretty funny! Literal interpretation videos have the potential to be hilarious. Your lead actor was definitely into it. Helped sell the funny and over-the-top-ness.

Improvements: Unless there's a different action, you shouldn't use the same exact shot twice (wrap me up, "B") Try to go off of other ideas and motif's you've established earlier! The lip syncing was off a bit.