Gold

Freedom

Glenbrook North

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

This is a dramatic narrative about a young women's reflections and realizations about her life. The film is intended to take viewers on an internal journey.

Judge 1

Positives: Many things worked well on this video; A story with a great narrative, told creatively in a concise manner and with concrete visuals; Well done, keep up the good work.

Improvements: Not much that could be improved. Not sure it would improve, but mixing in a music track would be worth a try - but it's not critical

Judge 2

Positives: The stills montage at the end worked really well. Good mix of shots. The flow of the video was smooth. Good editing. A very nice video.

Improvements: Cutting to black between scenes is a little distracting in the mirror shots. Maybe a fade to black would smooth it out. Nothing else major that I would improve on. Nicely done.

Judge 3

Positives: Good job with the storyline and visuals. Good camera angles created viewer interest.

Improvements: Nothing that I feel you could improve on.