This is a demonstration video on how to make my grandmother's poppy seed cookies.
Positives: Liked the close up details. The stop motion of cookies disappearing was also cute.
Improvements: Abrupt transition from intro music was a bit off-putting. Some important shots are out of focus.
Positives: good use of side box to list ingredients since there was so many. good close ups to show how to mix ingredients. good time lapse at the end to show cookies getting taken away
Improvements: no negative comments. I enjoyed the video as-is
Positives: Great story, nice variety of shots, fun stop motion of disappearing cookies.
Improvements: type is hard to read