This is a commercial for Jeep. I wanted to capture the excitement and power of driving a Jeep.
Positives: sound and pacing
Improvements: Lighting and final shot
Positives: Nice camera work and editing. Music choice works well, too.
Improvements: I'm not so sure that a parking garage demonstrates how exciting driving a Jeep can be.
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Improvements: Be careful with the static shots of the jeep, slows down the excitement. Could be shot in a more interesting place than a parking garage.