Bronze

How I Imagine It

Homewood-Flossmoor

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A spin-off of Catcher in the Rye- the whole thing was imagined.

Judge 1

Positives: Editing of the visuals and the effects filter on the video was a nice touch. The Camera work and framing worked really well on this video. Great job on the opening title sequence

Improvements: audio was clean but the mic was right in the open and could be seen. Additional lighting during some scenes could be improved

Judge 2

Positives: Good mix of camera shots and angles. The music track worked real well.

Improvements: The story line was a little confusing at times. Some of the scenes drug a little bit. I would tighten up the editing to give it a little faster pace.

Judge 3

Positives: Great opening. Music worked well with visuals and action. Good camera work.

Improvements: Work more on creative lighting.