Bronze

Spring is Here

Homewood-Flossmoor

Cinematography

Entry Description

A first look at Spring... at least indoors!

Judge 1

Positives: Good choice of music to capture the feeling of Spring. Lighting and exposure were excellent and really emphasized the brilliant colors of what you were shooting.

Improvements: The overall presentation was a series of rack-focus shots. Too much of the same thing... no variety. And let me see where you are... a few establishing shots, the overall environment.

Judge 2

Positives: Good framing. Nice use of colors.

Improvements: Too much rack focus. Rack focus works great but not when every shot is a rack focus.

Judge 3

Positives: Great color. Nice use of natural light.

Improvements: Watch your rack focus shots. The transition needs to be clean and tight. Don't over use an effect or camera change. Everything is better in moderation.