Bronze

The O'My's

Homewood-Flossmoor

Cinematography

Entry Description

Incredible shots at a live concert

Judge 1

Positives: Very well crafted behind-the-scenes shots. Also, a good video sequence that tells the story.

Improvements: I would prefer using a piece of audio from the concert you shot. Lay down one straight piece of audio from the concert, then do video-only edits over that music. You're telling a video story of a concert, but not using what the concert is all about --- its music.

Judge 2

Positives: Good selection of camera shots. Nice use of audience reaction shots.

Improvements: If you are submitting shots of a live performance, the music needs to match the video. I don't even know if the music used in this video is the band that is shown playing live.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice shot composition. Great job dealing with low light shooting.

Improvements: Watch your focus a couple shots could have been cleaner.