Gold

Who I Am

Glenbrook South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Imagine a shy introverted girl who has never had a friend and her parents are always busy with their work. Roxy always kept to herself, until she met Grace, someone who found her when she was lost. When Grace asks Roxy to attend a party, how far will Roxy push her limits just to fit in? Roxy soon finds that when she was lost, all she needed was a little guidance from a friend to find her way.

Judge 1

Positives: Storyline and character development worked well; Good use of various shot selections in telling the story; Good pace and edited well.

Improvements: Not much needs to improve; Audio and music sound mix could be improved;

Judge 2

Positives: Nice camera shots. Good use of the dolly shot. The pace of the editing was good. It kept the story flowing.

Improvements: Smooth out the transitions from one music track to another. A little abrupt and distracting. Watch for jump cuts like the scene when the bell rings at the end of class.

Judge 3

Positives: Very well done. Great job of mixing lighting, camera work and sound to the storyline. Great job and fun to watch.

Improvements: No improvements needed.