Silver

Oakland

Homewood-Flossmoor

Music Video

Entry Description

Hit song Oakland re-make.

Judge 1

Positives: Liked the piece. Great flow and very creative shots. Lip sync was spot on. Good job.

Improvements: Camera work could have been improved a little.

Judge 2

Positives: Good video! Well paced. Good story development. Nice job mixing up locations. Good job with the car shots. I know that can be difficult.

Improvements: Lip-sync was good, but could be tightened up. For some reason, I feel that your exposures are a bit dark in most places. Lighting can be improved. Camera could be a bit smoother in certain parts. I would have liked some close-ups.

Judge 3

Positives: Scenes w/ the car and driving were well shot / composed. Audio sync to vocals was good.

Improvements: Narrative / story was unclear / confusing. Inconsistent video quality from shot to shot; different cams? lighting /exposure widely variant.