Silver

Skyscraper

Glenbrook South

Music Video

Entry Description

Through dance and meeting two new friends, the main character and her friends overcome they're issues with bullying, self image, and family issues.

Judge 1

Positives: Liked the use of transitions to reflect on past issues. Opening sequence was creative.

Improvements: Shots seemed to linger too long and story was hard to understand from shots used.

Judge 2

Positives: Great story / Character development! Loved the rack focus. Nice change up in locations. Good attempts at camera movements.

Improvements: Lighting good, but just a bit of added light or even a well placed fill light would do wonders. Try and refrain from just using existing lighting on interior shots. Maybe a few more close-ups. Feel that emotion of the characters. Feel that dance. Show me. Steady up that camera. Moving the camera is great! Just don't make the moves look sloppy or cause unwanted attention.

Judge 3

Positives: Creative use of dance for transition / catalyst. cam work on dance segments is strong.

Improvements: Some cam shots were overexposed. Editing pacing on non-dance segs could've been tighter.