Gold

Apple Paper

Homewood-Flossmoor

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

The newest release from Apple has everyone going crazy.

Judge 1

Positives: Sarcasm worked well

Improvements: Needed more variety of camera angles. Only had one from back of room. needed tighter editing to move story along better.

Judge 2

Positives: Sound was mixed nicely Good Comedic effect

Improvements: Work on Script Lighting was not consistent

Judge 3

Positives: enjoyed the story liked the transitions

Improvements: could have been a little better scripted could have been edited a little better