Silver

Halloween Feature 2013

York

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A group of students are locked in the announcements lab and chaos ensues. Original ending faded into the daily announcements for the day

Judge 1

Positives: Creative camera angles and framing worked well. Nice job on lighting - Editing was nicely done and kept the story moving.

Improvements: The plot and story could be stronger. Even though the storyline was weak it was a well produced piece.

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of camera shots to add to the suspense. Good pacing on the editing. Kept my interest and didn't drag.

Improvements: A few spots of the audio track were a little hard to understand. Really there are no other major suggestions to improve on. Good job.

Judge 3

Positives: I enjoyed watching the video. I thought the opening sequence was great. Storyline was good. Good audio effects and lighting effects.

Improvements: Keep the energy level from the open throughout the video.