Silver

Paranormal Investigators

Homewood-Flossmoor

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Searching the high school for the super natural

Judge 1

Positives: cute story

Improvements: audio off mic (too much 'air' in sound) - on camera mic :(

Judge 2

Positives: the narrative worked well Shot angles varied

Improvements: lighting could be improved acting should be practiced

Judge 3

Positives: fun topic

Improvements: poor use of lighting continued cutting out not good