1st Place :: Division A

Glenbrook South Swim Feature

Glenbrook South

Feature Story

Entry Description

This is a feature story on Glenbrook South's ambitious Mens Varsity Swim Team. The team is full of fresh faces and hardened veterans. They has been successful so far, but what has been the key to their success? Find out in this interesting story on what makes a swim team successful.

Judge 1

Positives: great pacing good looking b-roll

Improvements: few shots could have used a tripod

Judge 2

Positives: Excellent choice of shots. Very creative camera angles and framing! The pacing of the opening package was tight and energetic!

Improvements: The lighting in the interviews could have been more crafted, providing separation of the subjects from their background.

Judge 3

Positives: Well mixed and well edited. Strong storytelling. Variety of interviews gave the piece depth and perspective.

Improvements: Lighting in interviews would have made this piece realky "pop". Continued use of score beneath other pieces of the feature could have really pushed the emotional value of interviews and the story as a whole.