Silver

Room 499

Oak Park River Forest

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Confused freshman tries to find his classroom.

Judge 1

Positives: cute story well told

Improvements: editing could be tighter clicking sound in background??

Judge 2

Positives: Comedic effect worked well shot angles varied

Improvements: camera shaky Use more sound effects

Judge 3

Positives: nice use of different camera angles good lighting

Improvements: over simplified needed better acting