A 2D animated Pepsi commercial created through Adobe Flash.
Positives: Wow, that looked exactly like a commercial. Everything about it worked.
Improvements: No suggestions, it was perfect.
Positives: good use of the logo with ad. had a good pace and the music was a good fit with the fast cuts of the editing.
Improvements: maybe a little more sound effects added to the transitions. push it a little more with your own personal creativity.
Positives: Nice graphics, The type is very well integrated with the image sound effects work quite well
Improvements: I wish there was more dynamic in the motion... more dramatic visual moments and unexpected angles There are nice moments, (particularly the rocket launch) but the piece overall seems pretty tame