Silver

Freaky Frights on Forest

Oak Park River Forest

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial for a street in North Riverside that celebrates Halloween.

Judge 1

Positives: pacing. Dark look matched the idea

Improvements: Too long. Too many end tags

Judge 2

Positives: Great lighting, and I like how the editing is synced with the music.

Improvements: Could be a little bit shorter, but nice job, overall.

Judge 3

Positives: Certainly no question as to what the commercial is advertising, some scary images for a day of fright.

Improvements: Add some disturbing sound elements to the music track. Shorten the opening shot.