Silver

Michael Faber: Hero

Neuqua Valley

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Twas a dark and stormy night, amongst the corridors of thou hospital, the astounding birth of Michael Faber was conducted. From then on out, Faber spent each and every day crating magic, passion, and creativity which each thing he did. To this day Faber spends his days throwing out his garbage during lunch, but even such a simplistic action as that, he revolutionizes into a majestic act of courage, hope, and freedom.

Judge 1

Positives: cute premise nice graphics

Improvements: bkgrnd audio (music) too loud - hard to hear actor more cutaway shots?

Judge 2

Positives: the text at the end worked nicely Sound was mixed well

Improvements: Story line inconsistent script needed to be worked on

Judge 3

Positives: nice use of support actors good transitions

Improvements: better camera work