Bronze

Anti-Valentine's Day

York

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Mari Hinchley stays at home on Valentine's Day, feeling down and depressed she explores the different things she deserves; only to discover the true meaning of the Holiday...loving yourself.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice music choice and the lighting was really right-on...nice irony

Improvements: VoiceOver is a little overdriven and audio could complement the edits more

Judge 2

Positives: The time of day text on screen took you through the day. The music bed insertion helped boost the scenes.

Improvements: There were a couple of technical problems that were distracting. The scenes could have been longer to develop the story more.

Judge 3

Positives: The narration audio was very clear. Also, your editing was tight.

Improvements: I didn't feel there was a plot to follow here. Perhaps adding a bit more detail will help to tell your story. While "less is more," too little is not enough.