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RB Football A Season In Review

Riverside Brookfield

Documentary

Entry Description

This is an excerpt of one game from a complete documentary review of the RB Football season.

Judge 1

Positives: The music fit the mood of a football game. The narrator spoke clearly.

Improvements: The couch who was interviewed was inaudible. The music overpowered his voice. The could have been a better range of camera shots. Perhaps some up close shots of the players on the sidelines, some slow motions of a great reception and some shots of the fans.

Judge 2

Positives: Meaning in this video is clear. It is a football review. Lighting is clear.

Improvements: Foot ball season film, is not innovative. This is something I've seen before. Innovative means: something new or a different way of doing the same thing. So, basically, you took clips from someone else and didn't shoot any of it. I think this could be improved by doing your own work. I couldn't hear the sound from the individual speaking. I think it would have been more interesting if I had. The background music was louder than he was.

Judge 3

Positives: Great field action.

Improvements: Music totally overwhelms conversation!