Gold

Perhaps It's Great

Waubonsie Valley

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie trailer for the movie, "Perhaps It's Great"

Judge 1

Positives: I like how you established in the beginning that these are two actors and then you showed the film slate. Very interesting concept. Good use of type to help tell the story. Love the rack focus shot of them sitting on the couch.

Improvements: Thought you could've built up the romance between the actors a little more. Possibly add a couple more shots of them flirting or hugging. The opening shot seemed to stutter and was a bit awkward, but love the creativity of the angle.

Judge 2

Positives: Great concept and execution! I was engaged throughout and have a great sense of both the tone and target audience.

Improvements: I'd like to get a hint of any conflict or humor in the story. I think you could have a little more fun with the title cards, making them match the tone of the story.

Judge 3

Positives: The story had an interesting premise, I like how it was supposed to be one thing and turned out to be something different. The lighting captured the mood well.

Improvements: Editing could be a bit smoother, there was a jump in the beginning. Some of the camera angles were a little shaky, The one scene with the sledding they seemed cut off and too low. Would have been nice to see a clearer shot of that.