Gold

Respect is the Key

Waubonsie Valley

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for Respect Week at Waubonsie Valley High School.

Judge 1

Positives: idea and acting

Improvements: a bit too long

Judge 2

Positives: Very nice message, and creative way of getting it across.

Improvements: The fluorescent lighting looked a bit harsh, and this could have been edited down a bit to be faster-paced.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice message, well packaged. Just the task of organizing the shoot is good experience.

Improvements: Make the lip syncing tighter.