Gold

Morton Achieves With Technology

Morton East

Documentary

Entry Description

Technology is used in many different ways at Morton East High School. Students use iPads, calculators, computers, and other technologies to further their education.

Judge 1

Positives: The editing was excellent. Each sequence flowed easily into the next one. Speaker was clear and concise. The number of examples covered was impressive. A lo of examples were shown.

Improvements: I can't think of any. Possibly some varied lighting could have improved.

Judge 2

Positives: Chopin as an opening was interesting. It made me drawn to what was being presented. I think what was most effective was the differing venues in which technology was being used, and even repaired.

Improvements: The narrator was only slightly better than monotone. I think a little excitement in the voice would help promote the school. I think better choice of music could keep interest longer. With a topic like this you want an audience to remain interested and while Chopin is useful, Pharrell would make people want to find out what else you have to say around the corner. In fact, putting that on some of the technology would link it in.

Judge 3

Positives: Creative and clearly written. Excellent supporting evidence.

Improvements: Nothing.