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Entry Description

Two young adults in love face the difficulties that come with long distance relationships. If you are interested in seeing the full unedited version go here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOWT37FnCbM

Judge 1

Positives: Use of angles and flashback worked well. Liked the use of graphics to depict the trip and length of separation.

Improvements: Camera work needed improvement. Pacing was slow for the song and lacked some creative flare in the editing.

Judge 2

Positives: Good character/plot development. Cute story. Good use of camera shots and angles. Good edit.

Improvements: Be mindful of camera compositions. Handheld camera works, but not when I am distracted by it. Watch your colors. Many of your interiors could use better lighting, not just existing.

Judge 3

Positives: Narrative / story was very effective. Actors were good.

Improvements: Camera work / shot composition was inconsistent. Editing was a bit slow.