Commercial for CapriSun drink
Positives: Visual effects. sound. end tag
Improvements: Lighting was dark. the idea
Positives: Creative idea, and great use of special effects.
Improvements: Lighting and camera shots could be improved.
Positives: Cute concept, the tagline is well integrated with the payoff shot. Like the empty capri pack sucking sounds.
Improvements: Better lighting would help. Show a close-up of his final suck, cheeks and straw before he punctures the package.