Silver

Jimmy John's Commercial

Waubonsie Valley

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for Jimmy John's sandwiches

Judge 1

Positives: idea spoof and acting

Improvements: look and sound

Judge 2

Positives: Nice idea. Clever way to distract the teacher.

Improvements: Production elements were pretty average. I realize that there's only so much you can do in a fluorescent-lit classroom, but more effort could have been made to make this "look" better. Nice job, though.

Judge 3

Positives: Good concept, well acted and put together. The teacher's reaction shot is great. Funny and well paced.

Improvements: Not sure about the smiling kid. With everyone else in the room half asleep I thought - because of how different his behavior is - that he would be a part of the story.