Commercial for GoPro cameras
Positives: Sound and picture
Improvements: Same shot pretty much throughout. The idea
Positives: Great job of showcasing the product. I like the variety of shots.
Improvements: It might be nice to shoot somewhere more interesting/exciting than the school halls.
Positives: Love the use of real skateboard sounds to punctuate the commercial. The idea, a skateboard mounted go pro cam, really shows off what you can do with this product.
Improvements: Probably be better as a :30, with a minute to fill it feels repetitive. Call more attention to the product when you cut away to it. Title an/or better shot so that the consumer knows what you are advertising.