Gold

Here We Go Again

Morton East

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A lovely couple casually strolling when suddenly they face an obstacle, and a wild adventure begins.

Judge 1

Positives: I love the stop-motion look and feel and the dialog cards

Improvements: Really good...nothing negative to say

Judge 2

Positives: The stop motion was effective. Editing and camera work were very well done.

Improvements: The story needed a conclusion. Stop motion is time consuming but the video needed a little more length.

Judge 3

Positives: The stop animation takes a long time to shoot, and you were not lazy with doing that. Excellent job. I also felt the music was a perfect choice for this.

Improvements: The story itself kind of leaves you empty. Developing more of a plot would go a long way. With as much time as you spent on the shooting and editing of this video, you want your plot to be worthy of the effort, but I didn't feel it was.