Gold

Passenger Seat

New Trier

Music Video

Entry Description

A video that takes a disjointed look a couple's relationship.

Judge 1

Positives: Audio levels are good. Consistent lighting.

Improvements: Try not to use the same shots over and over. Every story has a beginning, middle and end.

Judge 2

Positives: Great story, the music really added to the characters and plot.

Improvements: I think you could have used some different camera shots or improved the lighting, hard to see at times.

Judge 3

Positives: I like the shots of the couple fighting a lot. They were well composed, and felt visceral, especially the slaps (the quick cutting also helped with that as well! You definitely nailed the moody tone you were going for!

Improvements: The shots with the couple fighting were great, but you shouldn't use the same shots twice, in the same order. That tells me you ran out of ideas (which I'm sure wasn't the case!) Some shots in the car were a little dark and hard to see what was going on. (Don't have opening credits and closing credits on the a 2:11 second video that say almost the same thing)