Gold

The One Day Challenge (Spoken Word)

Auburn

Music Video

Entry Description

The One Day Challenge Is a poem that was created by jamarious foat.

Judge 1

Positives: The black and white shots are great. Good message.

Improvements: Watch lip syncing in editing process. Don't overdo super imposition transitions.

Judge 2

Positives: Interesting story. Most images are well composed and sequenced.

Improvements: Some lip-syncing off a bit. Some lighting needing to be better.

Judge 3

Positives: Powerful video, with a powerful message. This is actually the stuff the world needs to see and hear. Simple, concise, and to the point, this is a piece that clearly gets it's message across without feeling over bearing.

Improvements: Lots of potential here! While the lip syncing worked, as a whole I feel like you could have perhaps filmed a bit more to maybe bring in some other imagery to help really drive your message home (Like images of the Sun for representing a day, or maybe a bit of exposition of when you were listing off all the things people are capable of, etc) You've got the talent and the message, now harness a bit of creativity to really bring this piece to the next level!