2nd Place :: Division AA

Passing By

New Trier

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

An Almost Love Story

Judge 1

Positives: Side by side shots work really well, and the video I edited really well with the music

Improvements: No negative comments....it was really good

Judge 2

Positives: I really liked the use of the split screen. Nice editing and camera work.

Improvements: Not a big deal, but the camera framing and lighting could use a tweak.

Judge 3

Positives: Good music! Nice use of split screen to show the two the two people going about their day.

Improvements: Make sure your full screen shots fill the available frame. While I fully understand the plot, it really just seemed like two people going about their day and enjoying it. Perhaps the plot could be improved by having the two occasionally "check each other out" or having more of a passing glance?