Bronze

M I S S E D

New Trier

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A Dramatic Short about Lost Friends

Judge 1

Positives: Some good camera angles and framing in a variety of locations. Editing worked well.

Improvements: The plot was unclear and needs to be improved - had trouble piecing it together; Audio and sound mix was okay but could be improved

Judge 2

Positives: Good job of mixing up the camera shots. Music worked well.

Improvements: The focus going in and out at the beginning was distracting. Would prefer fading to black instead of cuts. Less jarring.

Judge 3

Positives: Enjoyed watching. Good storyline and good visuals. Good sound.

Improvements: Maybe not use the camera autofocus as much.